WeWriWa o5.26.13

Welcome to another week of Weekend Writing Warriors/Snippet Sunday! I know you have been waiting all week to read more of Karlea and Armani :)

So last week, Karlea started to kick Armani's ass, high on his blood. This week the battle continues...

Karlea had never experienced a rage so strong, not even when she was high on Jake or Vaughn's blood; she was going to rip Armani apart and get that key, gain her freedom back. Armani laughed as his body smashed into the wall, "Your strength is magnificent and your rage is just...beautiful."
"Shut up!" Karlea screamed, unable to control herself as she smashed him up against the wall again. 
"So meant to be one of us..." Armani grinned. 
Karlea stared at him and then slapped him hard across the face; he just looked at her and laughed before doing the same to her, giving her some resistance to see how she would react.  It hurt, but the rage still burned enough for her to turn back to Armani with an evil smile while looking him in the eye, and say sarcastically, "Ouch," before lifting Armani by the shirt collar and throwing him across the room. 

That boy is in trouble. Karlea may just prove that she is too much to handle.

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~Siren

WeWriWa o5.19.13

Happy Sunday! The semester is officially over for me! Can I just write my book now?

So, we left off last week with Armani's thoughts as Karlea drank from him, and what Karlea was feeling as she pulled away from him.

Karlea never felt so good before, Armani's blood was strong, not even Jake nor Vaughn's made her feel like this. Part of her wanted to just stand there and ride the waves of euphoria as they came and went, not caring what Armani would do to her, but there was a reason she drank from him, a reason she drank so much. Armani touched her upper arm, sending the most pleasurable shiver through her body, making her forget why she drank. She wanted him to touch her again and do whatever he wanted because Karlea knew with the extreme euphoria that came with his blood, whatever it was that he did, would feel amazing. 
"He is never going to want you back."Armani said, smirking.
Instantly, Karlea snapped out of the euphoria, and rage took over. Karlea lunged at him, pushing him into the opposite wall, her strength so great that the sound of his body smashing into the concrete blocks was deafening.

Armani may be in trouble here, or does he have another trick up his sleeve?
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WeWriWa 05.12.13

Happy Mother's Day to all the moms out there! And welcome to another Weekend Writing Warriors. I am so happy to be back participating each week, I was definitely missing this from my life - I need this no matter how busy I get.

I want to quickly thank all my readers from last week for stopping by - I will get to reading yours! I need to create a schedule again, where I sit and read/comment on everyone's.

Okay, so where we last left off in BloodLust: Armani, Karlea was tempted by the offering of his blood, which she took in hopes of becoming stronger so she could kill Armani and escape. In the following snippet, we get insight into Armani's thoughts as she drinks from him. Remember he was getting totally turned on from her drinking from him...

Armani had to have her, he had to make her his for eternity. No one had ever made him feel like this, vampire or otherwise. She would be an excellent lover and he could play with her.He would keep her human for as long as he could, eventually turning her, blood bonding her as a human, and then as a vampire. Her love for Jake and Vaughn made her destin to become a vampire anyway, Armani would simply make her love him. 
Karlea pulled away from his arm, fast, as the wound began to heal, she was at her limit of blood intake. One hand held onto Armani's arm, her nails digging into his skin as the first euphoria of how much she drank passed through her, making her completely high like a drug and lost to the world. Armani knew exactly what she was feeling and that, along with her nails digging into his vampiric flesh, turned him on even more.

That was a long snippet. And so intense, I can't even make a comment about it or even give you a hint of where it might go!

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WeWriWa 05.05.13

Welcome to another edition of Weekend Writing Warriors. 

This week is another 8 from my WIP novel, BloodLust: Armani. In this scene, Armani has fed her some of his blood and is trying to get her to fight him for her freedom. Last week's snippet left Armani offering more of his blood to her. Will she take it?

Armani held it out to Karlea, "Here." She looked at it and looked away as though the temptation was too much.
"You want it." Armani said, "You know how it will make you feel, and the power it will give..."
"Just think, you could get out of here and find your way back to Jake."
Karlea took his wrist, her warm touch radiating through him as she held onto it and brought it to her mouth. He felt her warm lips wrap around the wound and gently suck, he couldn't believe how euphoric it felt to have her touch him and suck on him. Armani watched as she drank and drank, completely turned on by it and by how much she was ingesting, usually humans couldn't tolerate so much. 

I guess the thought of killing Armani and finding Jake was too tempting for her not to drink. What is Armani thinking?

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Weekend Writing Warriors - The Return of Armani - 04.28.13

Today Armani is back for more playtime :)
Ever since my trip to Los Angeles (which was awesome by the way), I have been swamped with work and have not even bothered with 8 sentences. Plus my head has been stuck in L.A. since my trip. I am completely in love with L.A. and I am moving to Hollywood/West Hollywood as soon as I can.

My inspiration forever! I met DxH!!!

So, where we last left off weeks ago (it should be the post below this one, I haven't updated my blog at all), Armani was doing what he does best; mess with Karlea in his own playful way. With Karlea high on his blood, Armani is trying to get her to fight him for the key that will lead to her freedom. In the last posted snippet, Armani discovered another one of her dark secrets...

"I can make that fantasy come true for you." He said and then bit her wrist, drinking more of her, as she gasped again. 
"I can make you feel something that you will never feel with anyone. I guarantee you will be left begging for more."
"No!"
"Then I guess the only way out is to kick my ass and get the key." Armani paused, "Perhaps you need more of my blood."
Armani let go of her and sliced his wrist wide open.

Will she drink more of him???

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~Siren

WeWriWa o3.24.13

Happy Sunday! This week's eight from my WIP titled BloodLust: Armani, picks up right where we left off last week, with Armani always wanting to know more about her...

"I'd really like to know what you did so wrong, that Jake doesn't ever want you back?" Armani dug his perfectly manicured long, sharp nails into her wrist. Karlea gasped as blood began to drip down.
Knowing the idea was planted in her mind, Armani licked the blood and drank from her wrist.
Armani pulled away. "You slept with his maker." He smiled. "You wanted them both at the same time."

Oops...I don't think she wanted him to know that :)

I have to thank everyone who commented last week, I didn't get a chance to comment back, I have been so swamped with classwork, so, thank you! I think I'm going to be swamped until the end of the semester. :(

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~Siren

WeWriWa o3.17.13

Happy St. Patty's Day! This is usually my fav holiday, but this year I am too busy to decorate, nor really celebrate. My sunday is going to be spent doing homework that I am totally behind on. And it will be my first sober one, no Guinness, no Irish Coffee, no Bailey's, and no Hennessy Irish Whiskey. 

This week BloodLust: Armani continues right where we left off last week; Armani is trying desperately to get Karlea to play with him ;)

Karlea pushed his hand off of her. "I know what to do,' she replied, "I've done it before."
Armani grabbed her wrist and grinned, "Your past seems very intriguing. From what I know already, you highly enjoy being bitten---"
"Only by Jake." Karlea interrupted. 
"A vampire bite is a vampire bite. And every time I have bitten you, I have felt the excitement rise in you."

Uh-oh, he's on to her ;)

So, I am going to share my pitch from Pitchapalooza for those who did not get a chance to read it. I may fix up the last line and add more. I haven't had a chance to work on it since my critique.

BloodLust:Armani 
When Armani Foscari, sees the beautiful human, Karlea, walk through the doors of the private Manhattan vampire club alone, he thinks she is incredibly stupid, although she seems confident and brave. Any human that comes into the club without a vampire escort is fair game, she must want to die. Maybe he should feel bad for her because these monsters will tear her apart – too late her blood has already tempted him.

Claiming his prize before any others can, Armani compels her to leave with him, but it takes more effort than it should. Armani will derive his own twisted pleasure before draining her until her heart stops beating, but he will soon discover her dark desires and her recent past as a lover to a vampire; one that left because she was somehow too much to handle, and was why she was in the club that night, alone, to find him.

Intrigued, Armani must resist the urge to kill and keep her alive, determined to get her to give in to her desires, and be completely submissive to him. Together their chemistry is on fire, even as she resists him at every turn. Can he keep her human and get her to accept, what he wants to be, her new life?

BloodLust: Armani will tempt you, possess you, and leave you breathless.

So, I have to ask my more seasoned writers, what is the difference between this pitch and a blurb? I wrote something else that was supposed to be a "blurb".

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