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Last week, we left off where Armani was flying Karlea to a new location. Today, we find out where that might be.
"Where am I?" Her voice quiet, weak, and tired.
"My penthouse."
"But where?"
What does Armani have in store for her now, she's bound and hanging from a hook?! Thanks for reading and please comment, I love reading your comments!
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Intriguing, but I'm not keen on the POV shifts.
ReplyDeleteI also can't imagine what he is planning for her.
ReplyDeleteI'm a little confused trying to visualize how she's tied... I get the hands above her head/hung from a hook thing, but what confused me was her feet finding the floor. Where were they? Wouldn't they have already been on the floor?
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, great snippet, and I had no problem with the POV shift... it seemed effortless and seamless to me. (Maybe because I'm really guilty of POV shifts...)
Yeah, I'm' with "PT" on this one. "Hanging" implies suspension. How could her feet be on the floor?
ReplyDeleteAlso, if she's inside a room, how would she know it's a loft apartment?