Sunday, August 18, 2013

WeWriWa o8.18.13

Happy Sunday! 

 Last week we left off where Armani was sucking her dry, in order to turn her into a vampire :)
I know you readers were all dying to see what happens next ;)

Armani exited the cell, not bothering to shut the cell door. He wiped the blood from his lips and pulled his phone from his pocket. He quickly dialed.
"Bring the car around, we need to leave now."

Karlea opened her eyes to see trees and lights passing by. She was in a car, it was night; she couldn't make out the parts of the streets or buildings she was seeing, but she could tell she was in a city. She felt cold and weak, the pain in her wrist was worse and radiating through her arm; she could feel the blood, still, on her neck and breast. 
Armani hadn't turned her...yet.

 Its only a matter of time...
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16 comments:

  1. Sarah WAugust 18, 2013 at 8:34 AM

    I wonder if he'll actually go through with it? I think he enjoys her defiance.

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    1. Danii X HallowsAugust 18, 2013 at 5:25 PM

      I think he does too! But that's not to say she won't be defiant as a vamp too ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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  2. gemma parkesAugust 18, 2013 at 8:40 AM

    Exciting snippet, great imagery especially the car journey.

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    1. Danii X HallowsAugust 18, 2013 at 5:27 PM

      Thank you! I'm a screenwriter/filmmaker, so I see everything cinematically as I write.
      Thanks for stopping by!

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  3. Summer RossAugust 18, 2013 at 11:02 AM

    New follower here-
    A lot going on in a short amount of time and boy is she in a predicament it seems.
    Thank you for sharing.
    ~Decadent
    My Blog

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    1. Danii X HallowsAugust 18, 2013 at 5:28 PM

      Welcome!
      Please feel free to read the other posted snippets, there is much to this story ;)
      Thanks for stopping by!

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  4. UnknownAugust 18, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    I wonder what his plans are for her. He didn't suck her dry, and now it's night, and she's in a car on the way to...? I like it when I'm left wondering. Nice snippet.

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  5. Veronica ScottAugust 18, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    And Armani remains the guy I love and hate....another intriguing excerpt, leaving me scratching my head why he hasn't turned her completely yet!

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    1. Danii X HallowsAugust 18, 2013 at 5:31 PM

      You may just love/hate this guy for a very long time!
      He may have bigger plans for her ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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  6. LindaAugust 18, 2013 at 9:01 PM

    He is playing with her nerves (and mine) I wonder where they are going.

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    1. Danii X HallowsAugust 24, 2013 at 4:39 PM

      Armani loves to mess with her. i don't think that will stop anytime soon.
      Thanks for reading!

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  7. PTAugust 19, 2013 at 10:51 AM

    Hmmm... and why is he waiting? Or,rather, what is he waiting for?

    I know I'm waiting to read more!

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  8. Alicia DeanAugust 20, 2013 at 2:14 PM

    Love me some vampires! This is a great snippet. What an intense, exciting cliff hanger. Well done!

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  9. Sharon Buchbinder, Romance AuthorAugust 24, 2013 at 10:33 AM

    Hmmm...glad I have tomorrow's snippet to look forward to after this cliff hanger!

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  10. Adrienne deWolfeAugust 24, 2013 at 8:52 PM

    You handled the VP char so well! I felt her daze as the car sped on. Great job!

    Hugs,
    Adrienne
    http://WritingNovelsThatSell.com

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