Sunday, August 11, 2013

WeWriWa o8.11.13

Are you guys ready for another Weekend Writing Warriors/Snippet Sunday? Ready to see what happens to Karlea after last week's defeat?

If you didn't read last week's 8 you can do so here, just to catch up, I don't want to give anything away this time ;)
(This was edited to fit within the 8 - i hate to do this, but I had to fit it all in, it just makes for a good snippet.)



Armani bit her neck hard, making her scream out; he drained her enough so she was weak, but conscious. Armani let go of her wrists. She could feel the blood dripping down her neck as she watched Armani pull down one side of her dress, unable to move. He cupped her bare breast with his hand, feeling her. He took the nipple between his lips and carefully sucked on it before biting down hard on the top of her breast. Karlea tried to scream but the sound was so faint. Her innate reaction was to struggle, but she resisted and instead, let her body relax, letting Armani take everything he wanted from her, as he drank and drank. As she entered the darkness, she knew she would never see Jake again, and when she awakened, she would be different...

Oh no, what is going to happen to her? She may wake up feeling a bit vampy :)
Thanks for reading and please comment! I love reading your comments!


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Hearts & Stars,
~Siren

12 comments:

  1. I just have the feeling things aren't going to turn out exactly the way Armani expects, which will be good conflict and tension for sure. Another great snippet!

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  2. What an evocative snippet. Good job.

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  3. Now I'm just wondering, once she is changed, is she going to want to kill him or not anymore?

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    1. You will have to wait to find out the answer ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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  4. Interesting. I'm looking forward to next week's post!

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  5. Enticing description.
    Great action.
    Makes you want to turn to the next page and keep reading.
    Nice 8!

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    1. Thanks Chip! I so have to catch up on some reading! Having 5 kids home on summer break, makes it impossible to do almost anything ;)

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  6. Vampires are just so sucky.:) I can't wait to see if she does become a vampire.

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    1. Heeheehee, that made me laugh :) They are sucky ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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