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I walked past Pete's empty security booth inside and looked to the right. There she was already on stage, just about to be topless. She broke her concentration on the few gentleman in front of her to look over at me and smile, purposely dropping her purple polka dot bra on the floor next to the chair that sat on the stage with her near the stripper pole...it must have been one of her props tonight.
This was Serena Fire, and she WAS fire. Her hair was dyed a dark red and fell straight to her shoulders. Her skin was pale almost seemed to sparkle in the stage lights, as did the red gem that was on her naval piercing. She was short, I towered inches above her, if I had to guess, I would say she was around five five. And very petite. Her makeup was always put on lightly, unlike some of the other dancers who caked it on. Her breasts were real and the perfect size, not too huge and not too small, and they were pierced.
Piercings . . . ouch! Nice descriptions, Danii!
ReplyDeleteIt's very revealing what aspects he chooses to notice!
ReplyDeleteGreat details in her description, although the thought of the piercings made me shudder. She sounds like a good performer, though. Great snippet! Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteGood description! Makes for an excellent excerpt...
ReplyDeleteGreat description of her!
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas, Dani! :-)
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