Sunday, April 1, 2018

WeWriWa o4.o1.18

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday! And Happy Spring! I am so excited it is April and winter is (hopefully) behind us.

 Where we last left off, Armani brought Karlea a cell phone and was going to let her call Jake...
Karlea picked up the phone and looked at it...this could be her freedom. She went to dial...212...her head was such a mess that she couldn't remember Jake's number. She knew it, she memorized as soon as she put the number in her phone...but now she couldn't.
"Is there a problem?"Armani asked.
"I-I can't remember his phone number. I know it, I always have, but my head is such a mess."

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5 comments:

  1. AdrianaApril 1, 2018 at 8:29 AM

    Oh no! A touch of amnesia? great snippet

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  2. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyApril 1, 2018 at 10:05 AM

    Oh, why do I feel like he knew this was going to happen?

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  3. AnonymousApril 1, 2018 at 3:03 PM

    Whatever he's done to her is rippling through her mind like a destructive tsunami.

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  4. Libby CampbellApril 1, 2018 at 4:06 PM

    Forgetting a phone number is such a classic symptom of stress - aggravated I'm sure by someone looking on. Well done.

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  5. LindaJuly 3, 2018 at 2:41 PM

    It's like she isn't even herself anymore. :'(

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