Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday! I'm kinda getting back into the groove of this and trying to post earlier in the week instead of the night before. The blog, however, needs a makeover, things are so outdated! lol.
Anyway, we are going to continue on with my untitled serial killer WIP. Picking up right where we left off last week with Dennis.
I grabbed my thermos of coffee and keys, and headed out the door for another day of running the shop yard. It was already, sunny and warming up in the Mojave desert on the outskirts of Lancaster, a single tumbleweed blowing across the barren dirt yard. I hobbled over to my car, my lame leg giving me more trouble than usual. What a fucking asshole Derrick was for smashing my leg with a baseball bat when we were teenagers. Fuck him.The sunlight reflected harshly off of the orange strips on my Dodge Challenger, creating a blinding glare. Beneath the glare, I could see dust had blown through the night, the black paint looking dull. It was such a bitch keeping a car clean in the desert. I would have to wipe it down, yet again, before going into L.A. later. If Derrick’s car was around, I would have drawn a dick in the dust for him, right across the windshield.
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I opened the car and got in, setting the thermos in the cupholder. As I went to stick the keys in the ignition, I stopped and touched the small purple crystal star keychain hanging off. It was almost a year ago when Serena Fire had given it to me for my birthday, along with a free lap dance. That girl was fire.
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Intriguing snippet and well done on feeding us the background information.
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DeleteLOL! Right across the windshield. Too good!
ReplyDeleteAnd truck windows are much bigger, too. Lol!!! 😂
DeleteExcellent job with putting in backstory that gives us a feeling of Dennis!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWow, you've revealed a lot about Dennis and Derrick in this snippet while leaving me with many more questions. LOL
ReplyDeleteGood! Thanks for reading!
DeleteThis makes me want to know more about Derrick.
ReplyDeleteMaybe more next week :) Thanks for reading!
DeleteGreat introduction to this character. I have so many questions!
ReplyDeleteI’m glad you do! Thanks for reading!
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