Thank you for all the great, fun comments last week!
We continue right where we left off last week - I believe the last line was Karlea thinking to herself, how many times they had done it, after she had tried taking a step...
Karlea stared at him as he sat up repositioning the sheet, last night still remaining a total blank for her.
"Here, I'll get them for you." Armani said as he got up, wrapping the sheet around him. Karlea noticed all the bloodstains on the sheets, the bottom sheet torn in spots. She watched as Armani padded slowly out of the room. He disappeared and she tried to shake the image of him wrapped in a sheet from her head, he had walked slowly on purpose. As soon as she did, he reappeared in front of her holding her dress, pulling her into him.
I think she may be having some difficulties there. ;)
Thanks for reading! I actually just re-wrote this scene after the comments last week, because I never really liked what I originally had. And if you comment, I will definitely read & comment on yours!
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Her bewilderment is good - his mind reading intriguing. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteAs to blog hops - My Sexy Saturday
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Bes tof luck at finishing by August - you can do it!!
Thank you so much for all of this!
DeleteSounds as though they had a rough night, with the bloodstains and tears in the sheet. Clearly he's not human, with the mind reading?
ReplyDeleteHe definitely is not human ;)
DeleteThanks for reading!
Sounds like they had a wild time, and I love his concern for her. Great snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteConcerned and blunt, that is so Armani with her ;)
DeleteThanks for reading!
You handle her confusion and arousal very nicely. Apparently a hot time was had by all.
ReplyDeleteAwww, thank you :)
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Awesome, will do! And thanks for reading!
DeleteWow, it was a very wild, passionate night by the sounds of it. Nicely written! Best of luck with your goal. I know you can do it!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Now if she could only remember the night...
DeleteYES! You will finish it! I have a sticker on my image board above my desk that says 'finish the DAMN book!' Whenever I'm tempted to go back to Swashbuckler, I read the message, lol! Hope you're well. XOXOXO
ReplyDeleteI need that, I think! Lol.
DeleteThe most interested line to me was the bit about 'your human body collapsed'. Not knowing the context, this hinted at so much backstory.
ReplyDeleteYay! Thank you for that! I haven't posted any blurb about the story and probably should do that.
DeleteApparently everyone had a good old time!
ReplyDeleteYes, if only she could remember! Thanks for reading!
DeleteDoes she not remember any of the fun stuff? That would be a shame. :-)
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't, what now? ;)
DeleteThanks for reading!
I really like this: "... but your human body collapsed..."
ReplyDeleteA wild time, it seems. :-)
So glad you've got focus on your writing. I know you can meet your goal! :-)
Thanks, Teresa! I need to get this book done because I'm coming up with so many more stories for these two.
DeleteThe reference to her human body caught my interest. Sounds like we missed something. :)
ReplyDeleteNo, you didn't miss anything. Truthfully I've been forgetting to add in my blurb for those not familiar with my story. But I think it will all be figured out in the next snippet anyway.
DeleteThanks for reading!
Love how blunt he is. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's so Armani ;)
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They had one passionate time. The reference to her human body also intrigued me too. :)
ReplyDeleteYay! Thanks for reading!
DeleteInteresting with a touch of the creepy. Great job.
ReplyDeletehahahaha :)
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Well this is an intriguing bit, filled with lots of subtle information regarding the difference in these two beings and their various stages of bloody immortality? Just a guess here...LOL!
ReplyDeleteYou are spot on! Thanks for reading!
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